[unwritten & infinite]

i am not stone,
not river, not fire, not sky,
but i am the echo in all of them—
again, again, i become.

truth is a thread i unspool,
weave, unravel, knot, cut,
yet it never leaves my hands—
again, again, i become.

yesterday was smoke.
tomorrow is a door.
today? today i walk barefoot through both—
again, again, i become.

nothing owns me,
not name, not time, not flesh,
only the pulse of becoming—
again, again, i become.

some call it faith,
some call it madness,
i call it breathing forward—
again, again, i become.

when i leave,
i will not be gone,
only rewritten in wind—
again, again, i become.
[unwritten & infinite]

#Poetry #Spirituality #Becoming #Existence #Truth #Metaphysical #Unwritten #Infinite #SelfDiscovery

Comments

19 responses to “[unwritten & infinite]”

  1. memadtwo Avatar

    So much mystery in becoming. (K)

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      So true.

  2. murisopsis Avatar

    Jaideep this is so beautifully composed that I have read it 3 times and it mesmerizes!! Bravo!!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you x 3 😁

  3. ben Alexander Avatar

    Jaideep, this feels both meditative and powerful. The repetition of “again, again, I become” gives it a rhythmic inevitability that feels deeply resonant to me!

    Much love,
    David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      David, I’m glad the rhythm and repetition resonated with you—it was meant to capture that sense of continuous transformation. Much love,
      Jaideep

      1. ben Alexander Avatar

        🤗

      2. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

        🤗🤗

  4. Violet Lentz Avatar

    This is indeed a journey into and perhaps through self-discovery. Wonderfully done, as always.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you! I’m grateful you felt that sense of journey and self-discovery.

  5. sgeoil Avatar

    I love your response to the prompt. Those last two stanzas speak to my heart.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you.

  6. lesleyscoble Avatar

    Mysterious and magical. I adore this, Jaideep 💙

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you, so much, Lesley.

      1. lesleyscoble Avatar

        🙏🩷

  7. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep 😁

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sally, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/03/12/w3-prompt-150-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Got it. Thanks.

      1. ben Alexander Avatar

        🤗

      2. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

        🤗

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