Contrasting Past and Present: A HaibunTags: haibun, contrast, past, present, nature

Contrasting Past and Present: A Haibun
Tags: haibun, contrast, past, present, nature

Intro Dear friends, Welcome to our W3 Poetry Prompt, which goes live on Wednesdays at The Skeptic’s Kaddish. You may click here for a fuller explanation of W3; but here’s the ‘tldr’ version: Part I The main ingredient of W3 is a weekly poem written by a Poet of the Week (PoW), which participants read […]

W3 Prompt #43: Wea’ve Written Weekly

In the past, the street was lined with tall trees that rustled in the wind. It was a quiet and peaceful neighborhood where the only sounds were the chirping of birds and the occasional laughter of children playing in the yard. The houses were modest but cozy, and the gardens were filled with colorful flowers that bloomed every spring.

Today, the street is no longer quiet. The rustling trees have been replaced by loud cars and noisy construction works. The houses have been renovated and expanded, and the gardens have been replaced with concrete driveways and artificial turf. People are always in a rush, and no one seems to have time to stop and smell the flowers.

Contrasting Past and Present: A Haibun
Tags: haibun, contrast, past, present, nature
Photo by daniyal ghanavati
Amidst the chaos, 
A lone sparrow sings its song,
Echoes of the past.

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13 responses to “Contrasting Past and Present: A HaibunTags: haibun, contrast, past, present, nature”

  1. poetisatinta Avatar

    That is truly beautiful <3

  2. michnavs Avatar

    lovely haibun

  3. wordsandcoffee1 Avatar

    I like how you’re contrasting the pace of life. Nicely done!

  4. memadtwo Avatar

    Your haiku works beautifully to remind us of what we’ve lost. (K)

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks!

  5. lesleyscoble Avatar

    This breaks my heart because it is too true. 💔 Artificial grass is an obscenity against nature (and please don’t mention the artificial hedges).
    When I was child, our street resonated with sparrow birdsong. Now there are none.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      So true! That natural essence of nature is almost lost.

      1. lesleyscoble Avatar

        I don’t understand this destructive artificial grass trend that suffocates the earth. It is ecocide.
        Your poem is an important one 🌱

      2. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

        Thanks!

  6. ben Alexander Avatar

    Jaideep ~ that haiku at the end is the perfect balance to your prose – I love it. I can just imagine the little bird singing its heart out! <3

    BTW, this week's W3 prompt, hosted by the kind and wonderful Selma Martin is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/03/01/w3-prompt-44-weave-written-weekly/

    <3
    David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Great. Thanks. 👍 😊

  7. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep <3

    I just wanna let you know that this week's W3, hosted by l'il ol' me, is now live!

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2023/03/08/w3-prompt-45-weave-written-weekly/

    I hope you enjoy!

    Sincerely,
    David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Yes, I know. Mine is the first entry, btw. 😊

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