Crane’s Soliloquy: A Poetic Ode to the Mysteries of Nature in Midnight Hues  #FFFC

Crane’s Soliloquy in a Midnight Hue

What are we,
but angles stretched into infinity,
sharp-billed mysteries piercing the canvas
of a sky too quiet to notice?

The world offers me no mirrors,
only this reflection in your eye,
where I hang, suspended
in my own dark symphony—
a monochrome of shadow and bone,
all ruffled sighs
and feathered breaths.

Oh, eye, so round—
like the first fruit to fall
from a tree of silence,
your golden green glow is neither predator
nor prey.
You witness me without blame,
for I am only ever passing through.

Listen.
There is no wind here, no tremor,
just the steady arc of my bill,
orange and earth-born,
fashioned by centuries of unspeaking.

Yet, if I had a voice,
would it be a shriek, or a song?
Would I spill a thousand words,
each tumbling from my mouth like stones?
Would I tell you of the reeds, the water,
the smallness of frogs beneath my wings
or the infinite patience
of being this—
a crane without name,
etched in nature's gaze?

See how the dark presses against me,
a silent partner in this waltz?
It teaches me what it is to forget—
to forget color, forget time,
forget the seasons that rise like questions
and fall like the unasked.

My wings,
which you do not see,
hold no answers.
They only hold the space
between sky and sea,
a promise of flight
and the weight of stillness.

So, what am I but a blur
of feather and flesh,
a crane on the edge of a dream
that won’t wake?
Call me what you will—
a sentinel of dusk,
a fleeting passage,
a whisper in the wild.

But know this,
even when I leave,
when the eye closes and darkness takes hold,
I am never truly gone.

I am the stretch
of every silence
that follows me.
Crane's Soliloquy: A Poetic Ode to the Mysteries of Nature in Midnight Hues  #FFFC

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6 responses to “Crane’s Soliloquy: A Poetic Ode to the Mysteries of Nature in Midnight Hues  #FFFC”

  1. michnavs Avatar

    This is such a brilliant take on the prompt. It beautifully explores themes of identity, existence, and the relationship between the self and the observer. The imagery of the crane—both delicate and ephemeral—serves as a powerful metaphor for the transience of life and the nature of being

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment! I’m really glad the themes of identity, existence, and the self resonated with you. The imagery of the crane was meant to evoke that delicate balance between life’s fleeting nature and our deeper sense of being, so I’m thrilled it connected with you in that way. Your words truly encourage me to keep exploring these layers of meaning.

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  2. Melissa Lemay Avatar

    This is amazing! You captured my attention from the first lines to the last. Parts I especially liked:

    “You witness me without blame,
    for I am only ever passing through.

    Listen.”

    “See how the dark presses against me,
    a silent partner in this waltz?
    It teaches me what it is to forget”

    Thanks for joining in!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m thrilled that the piece resonated with you. I love that you highlighted those specific lines—they hold a lot of meaning for me.

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  3. The Sicilian Storyteller Avatar

    What an incredible poem! Thank you for sharing this amazing gift with us. 🌟

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