Whispers in the Dark: A Hidden Love Story of Light and Shadows #W3Prompt

She touched light where shadows fell,
a quiet spark, unseen, unfelt,
the way her heart would catch and stir,
a secret glance, a silent blur.

In crowded rooms, theyโ€™d drift, disguisedโ€”
her darkened gaze, his brightened eyes,
each step a map traced in between,
in quiet light, half lost, unseen.

Their love, a soft and hidden spark,
breathed in light and breathed in dark.
Whispers in the Dark: A Hidden Love Story of Light and Shadows #W3Prompt

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21 responses to “Whispers in the Dark: A Hidden Love Story of Light and Shadows #W3Prompt”

  1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    The weaving of light and dark in this poem of hidden love emotes tension and intrigue.

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  2. memadtwo Avatar

    This flows beautifully. (K)

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  3. Nicole Horlings Avatar

    Their love, a soft and hidden spark,
    breathed in light and breathed in dark.

    I love this ending couplet!

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  4. M Avatar
    M

    wonderful, another poem better heard than read. This was a treat.

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  5. murisopsis Avatar

    Marvelous love story!! ๐Ÿค—

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  6. kittysverses Avatar

    Beautiful piece of poetry. :)

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  7. wrestlingwordblog Avatar

    This tells such a beautiful story!

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  8. lesleyscoble Avatar

    Lovely poem, Jaideep ๐ŸŒน

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks! ๐ŸŒฑ

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  9. ben Alexander Avatar

    Hey Jaideep,

    Your imagery of the secret glances and quiet spark is so tender, and it really evokes a sense of something intimate and fleeting!

    ~David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Hey David,

      Thank you so much for that beautiful response! I’m thrilled to hear that those small, quiet moments resonated with you. Thereโ€™s something magical in capturing that fleeting intimacy, and I’m glad it came across as tender. Really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts! ๐ŸŒฑ
      ~Jaideep

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  10. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep ๐Ÿ‘‹๐Ÿป

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Carol Anne, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/11/13/w3-prompt-133-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoyโฃ๏ธ

    Much love,
    David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks you David, ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’

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