Whispers in the Dark: A Hidden Love Story of Light and Shadows

She touched light where shadows fell,
a quiet spark, unseen, unfelt,
the way her heart would catch and stir,
a secret glance, a silent blur.

In crowded rooms, they’d drift, disguised—
her darkened gaze, his brightened eyes,
each step a map traced in between,
in quiet light, half lost, unseen.

Their love, a soft and hidden spark,
breathed in light and breathed in dark.
Whispers in the Dark: A Hidden Love Story of Light and Shadows #W3Prompt

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22 responses to “Whispers in the Dark: A Hidden Love Story of Light and Shadows”

  1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    The weaving of light and dark in this poem of hidden love emotes tension and intrigue.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Absolutely!

  2. memadtwo Avatar

    This flows beautifully. (K)

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks!

  3. Nicole Horlings Avatar

    Their love, a soft and hidden spark,
    breathed in light and breathed in dark.

    I love this ending couplet!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks!

  4. M Avatar

    wonderful, another poem better heard than read. This was a treat.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you!

  5. murisopsis Avatar

    Marvelous love story!! 🤗

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks!

  6. kittysverses Avatar

    Beautiful piece of poetry. :)

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks!

  7. wrestlingwordblog Avatar

    This tells such a beautiful story!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you!

  8. lesleyscoble Avatar

    Lovely poem, Jaideep 🌹

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks! 🌱

  9. ben Alexander Avatar

    Hey Jaideep,

    Your imagery of the secret glances and quiet spark is so tender, and it really evokes a sense of something intimate and fleeting!

    ~David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Hey David,

      Thank you so much for that beautiful response! I’m thrilled to hear that those small, quiet moments resonated with you. There’s something magical in capturing that fleeting intimacy, and I’m glad it came across as tender. Really appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts! 🌱
      ~Jaideep

  10. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep 👋🏻

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Carol Anne, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/11/13/w3-prompt-133-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks you David, 👍💐

  11. […] even now,as I write this,feeling the words arrive,one by one,I sense it again—that gentle, unmistakable signalthat I am not writing into […]

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