Free,
Unseen,
Dreams take flight,
Breaking the chains,
Wings of hope stretch wide,
Unfurling against the winds,
The sky becomes an open page,
Each whisper of air a gentle guide,
Limitless horizons call, hearts collide,
"Free, unseen, dreams take flight, breaking the chains."
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Nice post 🌺🌺
Thanks!
“My mind to me a kingdom is, such perfect joy therein I find as far exceeds all earthly bliss that God or nature hath assigned” – Wm. Byrd There is so much freedom of thought even when the body is not free…. wonderful poem.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Byrd’s lines beautifully capture the essence of inner freedom and the boundless joy the mind can create, even in constrained circumstances. It’s a powerful reminder of the resilience of the human spirit and the infinite sanctuary our thoughts can provide.
The mind can be a refuge from many things or it can be a prison… For me it is freedom.
That’s a beautiful perspective. The mind indeed holds immense power—how we nurture it can shape our reality. It’s inspiring to hear that it brings you freedom. For some, the journey to making the mind a refuge or source of liberation is lifelong, but your words are a testament to what’s possible when we embrace its potential.
Thanks!
We always need hope
Absolutely, hope is what keeps us moving forward, even in the toughest times. It’s the light that guides us through darkness and reminds us that better days are always possible.
Sometimes dreams provide a refuge that physical world cannot. A great write, Jaideep.
Thank you so much! Dreams indeed have a way of offering solace and possibilities that the physical world often cannot. They remind us of the boundless potential within our imagination. I’m glad you enjoyed the piece!
Indeed, that is so true. My pleasure. I did enjoy it very much.
Strong poem, Jaideep. It’s too bad freedom is a dream, and thank goodness for dreams.
Thank you for your thoughtful comment! Dreams do have a way of keeping the flame of freedom alive, even when it feels out of reach. They remind us of what’s possible and give us strength to keep striving.
Jaideep, this poem is absolutely beautiful! You’ve captured that feeling of limitless potential in such an inspiring way—really lovely work!
~David
Thanks, David. 🤗
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hi, Jaideep❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted for the very first time by our lovely Lady Lee, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/12/04/w3-prompt-136-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy 😁
Much love,
David
Thank you!
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