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Fallen Star: A Poignant Rondelet of Loss and Longing #W3Prompt

Fallen Star
A light once bright, now lost afar,
Fallen Star
Your absence leaves a lasting scar,
I reach, but cannot bridge the bar,
The void between feels vast, bizarre,
Fallen Star
Fallen Star: A Poignant Rondelet of Loss and Longing #W3Prompt

#PoetryOfLoss #EmotionalWriting #RondeletPoem #GriefAndHealing #FallenStar

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11 responses to “Fallen Star: A Poignant Rondelet of Loss and Longing #W3Prompt”

  1. ladyleemanila Avatar
    ladyleemanila

    so poignant :) I love it

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Thank you.

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  2. murisopsis Avatar
    murisopsis

    An interesting monorhyme of longing. The absence is palpable! Well done!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Thanks!

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  3. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    Jaideep, I love how you captured the feeling of loss and longing with such clarity. Beautiful work!

    ~David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Thanks, David. 🤗

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        ben Alexander

        *hug*

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    ben Alexander

    hi, Jaideep❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our wonderful Mich, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #137: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy 😁

    Much love,
    David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Great, thanks, David.

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      1. ben Alexander Avatar
        ben Alexander

        🤗

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        PebbleGalaxy

        🤗

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