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Life’s Fleeting Moments: A Poem on Time and Regret #W3Prompt

Bickety Bockety,
Isadora Twain,
Wandering aimlessly,
Life was her bane.

Incontrovertibly,
Time did her wrong,
Irretrievable,
Gone was her song.
Life’s Fleeting Moments: A Poem on Time and Regret #W3Prompt

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25 responses to “Life’s Fleeting Moments: A Poem on Time and Regret #W3Prompt”

  1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar
    D. Avery @shiftnshake

    Poor Isadora. But the poem sure sings!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      😄 Thanks.

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  2. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    Wow, Jaideep, this is really sad. I Googled “Isadora Twain” but I couldn’t find anything… who was she?

    ~David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Fictional.

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      1. lesleyscoble Avatar
        lesleyscoble

        I Googled her as well, Jaideep! You’ve created a wonderful, mystical, melancholic character. I really enjoyed your poem. It has a beautiful rhythm. Thank you 🙏💕

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      2. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
        PebbleGalaxy

        😄 Thanks!

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      3. lesleyscoble Avatar
        lesleyscoble

        Ps. I also love the accompanying image. A perfect book cover for your novel, Isadora Twain!

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      4. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
        PebbleGalaxy

        😄 Thanks! 🌱

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  3. paeansunplugged Avatar
    paeansunplugged

    Well done! You made it flow, Jaideep.

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Thanks.

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      1. paeansunplugged Avatar
        paeansunplugged

        You are welcome.

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  4. murisopsis Avatar
    murisopsis

    A delightful romp!!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Thanks!

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  5. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar
    Stine Writing and Miniatures

    Very nicely done! Yours has that sing-song I hear in my head!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Thanks fabulous! 🌟

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  6. wlknlr.wolkenleer Avatar
    wlknlr.wolkenleer

    Oh, I like your take as well as the picture!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Thank you!

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  7. sgeoil Avatar
    sgeoil

    Well done!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      Thanks!

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      1. sgeoil Avatar
        sgeoil

        You’re welcome.

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  8. wordsandcoffee1 Avatar
    wordsandcoffee1

    Great flow!

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  9. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    hi, Jaideep❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our amazing Punam, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #139: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy 😁

    Much love,
    David

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    ben Alexander

    Hi, Jaideep❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our wonderful Heather Carr-Rowe, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #140: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy 😀

    Much love,
    David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar
      PebbleGalaxy

      ✅

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      1. ben Alexander Avatar
        ben Alexander

        🤗

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