Life’s Fleeting Moments: A Poem on Time and Regret

Bickety Bockety,
Isadora Twain,
Wandering aimlessly,
Life was her bane.

Incontrovertibly,
Time did her wrong,
Irretrievable,
Gone was her song.
Life’s Fleeting Moments: A Poem on Time and Regret #W3Prompt

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25 responses to “Life’s Fleeting Moments: A Poem on Time and Regret”

  1. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Poor Isadora. But the poem sure sings!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      😄 Thanks.

  2. ben Alexander Avatar

    Wow, Jaideep, this is really sad. I Googled “Isadora Twain” but I couldn’t find anything… who was she?

    ~David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Fictional.

      1. lesleyscoble Avatar

        I Googled her as well, Jaideep! You’ve created a wonderful, mystical, melancholic character. I really enjoyed your poem. It has a beautiful rhythm. Thank you 🙏💕

      2. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

        😄 Thanks!

      3. lesleyscoble Avatar

        Ps. I also love the accompanying image. A perfect book cover for your novel, Isadora Twain!

      4. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

        😄 Thanks! 🌱

  3. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Well done! You made it flow, Jaideep.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks.

      1. paeansunplugged Avatar

        You are welcome.

  4. murisopsis Avatar

    A delightful romp!!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks!

  5. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar

    Very nicely done! Yours has that sing-song I hear in my head!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks fabulous! 🌟

  6. wlknlr.wolkenleer Avatar

    Oh, I like your take as well as the picture!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you!

  7. sgeoil Avatar

    Well done!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks!

      1. sgeoil Avatar

        You’re welcome.

  8. wordsandcoffee1 Avatar

    Great flow!

  9. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our amazing Punam, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/12/25/w3-prompt-139-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy 😁

    Much love,
    David

  10. ben Alexander Avatar

    Hi, Jaideep❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our wonderful Heather Carr-Rowe, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/01/01/w3-prompt-140-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy 😀

    Much love,
    David

      1. ben Alexander Avatar

        🤗

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