Endless Echoes of Love: A Ghazal for Señorita

The stars whisper secrets to the moon, Señorita,
Soft sighs of longing fade too soon, Señorita.

No voice, yet the wind carves your name—Señorita,
Time unspools, then knots again—Señorita.

The ocean hums an ageless tune in longing,
Waves rise and fold in soft duress, Señorita.

The sky holds our names in silver-lit lines,
Etched by the night, a carved monsoon, Señorita.

Your laughter still lingers in shadowed halls,
A melody lost, yet never strewn, Señorita.

Beneath the weight of unsaid words we stand,
A bond unshaken, yet it turns, Señorita.

The moon is a hollow, hungering thing,
Drinking the dark, whispering pain—Señorita.

What is distance but a mirror bent?
What is longing but a chain—Señorita?

No fate nor fire can sever what we weave,
In loss and light, the spirit learns, Señorita.

'Pebble' walks where echoes speak your name,
And in that space, the world returns, Señorita.

'Pebble' writes in ink that fades,
Still, the silence speaks the same—Señorita.
Endless Echoes of Love: A Ghazal for Señorita

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19 responses to “Endless Echoes of Love: A Ghazal for Señorita”

  1. Violet Lentz Avatar

    Hauntingly beautiful. I especially liked the line, ‘a melody lost, but never strewn’.

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  2. murisopsis Avatar

    Jaideep this is a delight to read – and more so when read aloud!! Bravo!

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  3. sgeoil Avatar

    Oh so very romantic!

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      1. sgeoil Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  4. yvettemcalleiro Avatar

    This might be my favorite poem this week, Jaideep! So beautiful!

    Yvette M Calleiro :-)

    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you, Yvette.

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  5. ben Alexander Avatar

    Jaideep, I feel like this captures longing and connection so poignantly. The repetition of “Señorita” weaves an emotional thread through each verse.

    Much love,
    David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      David, thank you for feeling the rhythm woven into the verses. Longing is a melody, and ‘Señorita’ was the refrain that carried it. Much love to you!

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  6. lesleyscoble Avatar

    Señor Pebble, esto es una poema muy buena. 😊

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Tus palabras son un eco hermoso. Gracias por leer. 😊

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  7. brazannemuse Avatar

    Oh I do love your ghazal 💞

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      That means so much! I’m glad you loved it.

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  8. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep :-)

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt, hosted for the first time by the wonderful Violet Lentz, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #148: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

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