[unwritten & infinite]

i am not stone,
not river, not fire, not sky,
but i am the echo in all of them—
again, again, i become.

truth is a thread i unspool,
weave, unravel, knot, cut,
yet it never leaves my hands—
again, again, i become.

yesterday was smoke.
tomorrow is a door.
today? today i walk barefoot through both—
again, again, i become.

nothing owns me,
not name, not time, not flesh,
only the pulse of becoming—
again, again, i become.

some call it faith,
some call it madness,
i call it breathing forward—
again, again, i become.

when i leave,
i will not be gone,
only rewritten in wind—
again, again, i become.
[unwritten & infinite]

#Poetry #Spirituality #Becoming #Existence #Truth #Metaphysical #Unwritten #Infinite #SelfDiscovery

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19 responses to “[unwritten & infinite]”

  1. memadtwo Avatar

    So much mystery in becoming. (K)

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  2. murisopsis Avatar

    Jaideep this is so beautifully composed that I have read it 3 times and it mesmerizes!! Bravo!!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you x 3 😁

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  3. ben Alexander Avatar

    Jaideep, this feels both meditative and powerful. The repetition of “again, again, I become” gives it a rhythmic inevitability that feels deeply resonant to me!

    Much love,
    David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      David, I’m glad the rhythm and repetition resonated with you—it was meant to capture that sense of continuous transformation. Much love,
      Jaideep

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  4. Violet Lentz Avatar

    This is indeed a journey into and perhaps through self-discovery. Wonderfully done, as always.

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you! I’m grateful you felt that sense of journey and self-discovery.

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  5. sgeoil Avatar

    I love your response to the prompt. Those last two stanzas speak to my heart.

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  6. lesleyscoble Avatar

    Mysterious and magical. I adore this, Jaideep 💙

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you, so much, Lesley.

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  7. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep 😁

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Sally, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #150: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Got it. Thanks.

      Liked by 1 person

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