Hey Jaideep, this is an exquisite and mind-expanding pieceโso many of the couplets shimmer with philosophical and poetic richness.
That said, I wouldnโt quite call it a ghazal in the formal sense, since thereโs no repeated refrain or consistent rhyme before it in each couplet. Still, the spirit of the formโespecially the sense of reverent aweโfeels beautifully present!
I enjoyed the scientific spirituality, the mathematical marveling… all the intelligences are there, and so an effective and profound final stanza. I enjoyed your poem!
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