Hey Jaideep, this is an exquisite and mind-expanding piece—so many of the couplets shimmer with philosophical and poetic richness.
That said, I wouldn’t quite call it a ghazal in the formal sense, since there’s no repeated refrain or consistent rhyme before it in each couplet. Still, the spirit of the form—especially the sense of reverent awe—feels beautifully present!
I enjoyed the scientific spirituality, the mathematical marveling… all the intelligences are there, and so an effective and profound final stanza. I enjoyed your poem!
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