A Letter Across Time

Dear self,
who once walked barefoot through monsoon puddles,
believing the sky was endless—

I am writing from the future,
where the sky is still endless
but you have learned that even horizons
have edges sharp enough to cut.

I want to tell you which roads to take,
which silences to break,
which hands to hold tighter.
But time is a strict keeper of secrets;
it lets me watch you from across the glass,
never letting me speak through it.

You will stumble where I already know the stones.
You will love with a heart
I wish I could shield.
You will lose—
but you will not be lost.

I have seen your triumphs too:
the quiet mornings
when your pen does not tremble,
the nights you finally rest
without bargaining with your thoughts.

If I could, I would whisper,
“Do not hurry.
The world is not a race,
but a mirror.”

But instead, I must keep walking,
watching the boy you were
become the man I am—
knowing all along
I cannot reach back,
cannot send this letter
into the river of time.

And still, I write it,
because even silence
can carry love.

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Comments

23 responses to “A Letter Across Time”

  1. Not all who wander are lost Avatar
    Not all who wander are lost

    Excellently expressed:)

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah!

  2. writingwhatnots Avatar

    Beautiful ❤️

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Marion

  3. ben Alexander Avatar

    Jaideep, this feels beautifully reflective.

    Your closing line — “even silence / can carry love” — really lingers with me in its quiet truth.

    ~David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, David 🤗

  4. Violet Lentz Avatar

    A brilliant letter to a younger self. I think your wisdom is evident, and your words ever so carefully chosen.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Violet.

  5. memadtwo Avatar

    And that love is palpable in your beautiful meditation. (K)

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, K.

  6. murisopsis Avatar

    Jaideep, the use of the letter to the younger you is brilliant! A perfect vehicle for this particular sorrow!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Val.

      1. murisopsis Avatar

        You are very welcome!

  7. judeitakali Avatar


    A profound and gorgeous poem.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks.

  8. lesleyscoble Avatar


    The word you chose is so beautifully expressed. Gorgeous writing. 💗

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Lesley.

      1. lesleyscoble Avatar

        💖

  9. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep 😍

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved A J Wilson, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/08/20/w3-prompt-173-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Wonderful prompt.

      1. ben Alexander Avatar

        I agree 👍🏻

  10. Melissa Lemay Avatar

    Masterful reflection.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Melissa.

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