Layered Love: A Hay(na)ku Poetry Series Exploring Love’s Many Faces

Michelle’s PoW winner poem:

Silence, a poem by Michelle Ayon Navajas
silence
leaks from the roof where night
grips like sigh to a window. i
wait,
held in the calm between thoughts—
you were never noisier
than when you
left.
the moon pushes down on the lake,
smoothings stars into
keepsakes,
silence.

Michelle’s prompt guidelines

🧩 Form: Hay(na)ku poetry series
Invented by: Filipino poet Eileen Tabios (2003).
Structure (per poem):
Line 1 → 1 word
Line 2 → 2 words
Line 3 → 3 words
No rules for rhyme, rhythm, or subject beyond the word count.

🎭 Theme: Love
Write 5 separate Hay(na)ku poems, each about a different aspect of love, including but not limited to:

Romantic love
Familial love
Self-love
Unrequited love
Enduring/timeless love

Each poem should stand alone but together create a layered meditation on love.

I. Romantic Love

Whispered
promises bloom
beneath starlit silence

II. Familial Love

Roots
run deep
through generations' embrace
Layered Love: A Hay(na)ku Poetry Series Exploring Love’s Many Faces

III. Self-Love

Mirror
reflects truth—
worthy, whole, enough

IV. Unrequited Love

Echoes
of longing
drift through empty halls

V. Enduring Love

Forever
beats steady
in weathered, clasped hands

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Comments

28 responses to “Layered Love: A Hay(na)ku Poetry Series Exploring Love’s Many Faces”

  1. […] the quiet corners of my restless mind,where dreams gather like autumn leaveswaiting to be swept into motion,I find myself askingwhat […]

  2. michnavs Avatar

    Thank you so much 🙏🫶 I am honore to be chosen this week’s POW.

    Your hay(na)ku is beautiful 🫶

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Welcome! And thank you!!

  3. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    Beautiful writing!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks.

  4. Stine Writing and Miniatures Avatar


    wonderfully written!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you!

  5. Nicole Smith Avatar


    I love these.

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Nicole.

  6. murisopsis Avatar


    Lovely series!!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you!

      1. murisopsis Avatar

        🤩

  7. Elizabeth Avatar

    Wonderful! Lots of emotions on them!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks.

  8. poetisatinta Avatar

    A beautiful layered mediation Jaideep ❤️

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you!

  9. Zipferlake Avatar


    This is wonderful:


    “Roots


    run deep


    through generations’ embrace”


    Congrats!

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you!

  10. brazannemuse Avatar


    Your words always leave feelings lingering (sigh) I especially experienced this in your 4th and 5th hay(na)ku – great poetry 💞Suzanne

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you, Suzanne.

  11. ben Alexander Avatar


    Jaideep, I love how you shaped this series. To me “forever / beats steady / in weathered, clasped hands” feels especially moving.


    ~David


    P.S. Did you see that I responded to your last rengay verse?

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, David. Yes, I replied to that. Sorry for the late response.

  12. lesleyscoble Avatar


    Beautiful series of poetry. 🌹

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks!

  13. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Reena, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #180

    Much love,
    David

    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Wonderful. Thanks.

      1. ben Alexander Avatar

        💚

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