A Letter Across Time

Dear self,
who once walked barefoot through monsoon puddles,
believing the sky was endless—

I am writing from the future,
where the sky is still endless
but you have learned that even horizons
have edges sharp enough to cut.

I want to tell you which roads to take,
which silences to break,
which hands to hold tighter.
But time is a strict keeper of secrets;
it lets me watch you from across the glass,
never letting me speak through it.

You will stumble where I already know the stones.
You will love with a heart
I wish I could shield.
You will lose—
but you will not be lost.

I have seen your triumphs too:
the quiet mornings
when your pen does not tremble,
the nights you finally rest
without bargaining with your thoughts.

If I could, I would whisper,
“Do not hurry.
The world is not a race,
but a mirror.”

But instead, I must keep walking,
watching the boy you were
become the man I am—
knowing all along
I cannot reach back,
cannot send this letter
into the river of time.

And still, I write it,
because even silence
can carry love.

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23 responses to “A Letter Across Time”

  1. Not all who wander are lost Avatar
    Not all who wander are lost

    Excellently expressed:)

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah!

      Like

  2. ben Alexander Avatar

    Jaideep, this feels beautifully reflective.

    Your closing line — “even silence / can carry love” — really lingers with me in its quiet truth.

    ~David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, David 🤗

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  3. Violet Lentz Avatar

    A brilliant letter to a younger self. I think your wisdom is evident, and your words ever so carefully chosen.

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Violet.

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  4. memadtwo Avatar

    And that love is palpable in your beautiful meditation. (K)

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  5. murisopsis Avatar

    Jaideep, the use of the letter to the younger you is brilliant! A perfect vehicle for this particular sorrow!

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      1. murisopsis Avatar

        You are very welcome!

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  6. judeitakali Avatar

    A profound and gorgeous poem.

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  7. lesleyscoble Avatar

    The word you chose is so beautifully expressed. Gorgeous writing. 💗

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Lesley.

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  8. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep 😍

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved A J Wilson, is now live:

    https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/08/20/w3-prompt-173-weave-written-weekly/

    Enjoy❣️

    Much love,
    David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Wonderful prompt.

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      1. ben Alexander Avatar

        I agree 👍🏻

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  9. Melissa Lemay Avatar

    Masterful reflection.

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Melissa.

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