Layered Love: A Hay(na)ku Poetry Series Exploring Love’s Many Faces

Michelle’s PoW winner poem:

Silence, a poem by Michelle Ayon Navajas
silence
leaks from the roof where night
grips like sigh to a window. i
wait,
held in the calm between thoughts—
you were never noisier
than when you
left.
the moon pushes down on the lake,
smoothings stars into
keepsakes,
silence.

Michelle’s prompt guidelines

🧩 Form: Hay(na)ku poetry series
Invented by: Filipino poet Eileen Tabios (2003).
Structure (per poem):
Line 1 → 1 word
Line 2 → 2 words
Line 3 → 3 words
No rules for rhyme, rhythm, or subject beyond the word count.

🎭 Theme: Love
Write 5 separate Hay(na)ku poems, each about a different aspect of love, including but not limited to:

Romantic love
Familial love
Self-love
Unrequited love
Enduring/timeless love

Each poem should stand alone but together create a layered meditation on love.

I. Romantic Love

Whispered
promises bloom
beneath starlit silence

II. Familial Love

Roots
run deep
through generations' embrace
Layered Love: A Hay(na)ku Poetry Series Exploring Love’s Many Faces

III. Self-Love

Mirror
reflects truth—
worthy, whole, enough

IV. Unrequited Love

Echoes
of longing
drift through empty halls

V. Enduring Love

Forever
beats steady
in weathered, clasped hands

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Comments

27 responses to “Layered Love: A Hay(na)ku Poetry Series Exploring Love’s Many Faces”

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    […] the quiet corners of my restless mind,where dreams gather like autumn leaveswaiting to be swept into motion,I find myself askingwhat […]

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  2. michnavs Avatar

    Thank you so much 🙏🫶 I am honore to be chosen this week’s POW.

    Your hay(na)ku is beautiful 🫶

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Welcome! And thank you!!

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  3. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    Beautiful writing!

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, Nicole.

      Like

  4. murisopsis Avatar

    Lovely series!!

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  5. Elizabeth Avatar

    Wonderful! Lots of emotions on them!

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  6. poetisatinta Avatar

    A beautiful layered mediation Jaideep ❤️

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  7. Zipferlake Avatar

    This is wonderful:

    “Roots

    run deep

    through generations’ embrace”

    Congrats!

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  8. brazannemuse Avatar

    Your words always leave feelings lingering (sigh) I especially experienced this in your 4th and 5th hay(na)ku – great poetry 💞Suzanne

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thank you, Suzanne.

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  9. ben Alexander Avatar

    Jaideep, I love how you shaped this series. To me “forever / beats steady / in weathered, clasped hands” feels especially moving.

    ~David

    P.S. Did you see that I responded to your last rengay verse?

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Thanks, David. Yes, I replied to that. Sorry for the late response.

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  10. lesleyscoble Avatar

    Beautiful series of poetry. 🌹

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  11. ben Alexander Avatar

    hi, Jaideep❣️

    Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Reena, is now live:

    W3 Prompt #180

    Much love,
    David

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    1. PebbleGalaxy Avatar

      Wonderful. Thanks.

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